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minus-squareEch@lemm.eelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up5arrow-down1·4 months ago“They were coming.” would be a much better final line.
minus-squareBronzebeard@lemm.eelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6·4 months agoMostly because it would be a full sentence unlike whatever we got in the OP
minus-squareEch@lemm.eelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·edit-24 months agoTbh, looking at it closer, I’m getting LLM vibes. Stuff like the weird, repeated punctuation happens a lot with those.
“They were coming.” would be a much better final line.
Mostly because it would be a full sentence unlike whatever we got in the OP
Tbh, looking at it closer, I’m getting LLM vibes. Stuff like the weird, repeated punctuation happens a lot with those.